Sunday, May 20, 2007

Away From Her

Up next in the movie review section:
Away From Her

If you're ever in the mood for an excellent love story, check this film out. It pulled a few tears out of me.

And inspired this beginning of a poem...

Catching your breath
My heart unfurls
Like a thousand sails

~DBMonteith

I've mostly avoided posting cheesy, romantic poems so far. Just like the other stuff, they spring to mind occasionally though, so I'll shove my fears aside and share them too.

2 comments:

Jeff Hebert said...

I didn't think it was cheesy at all, in fact I thought it was lovely. Nice job!

David M said...

Thanks, Jeff!
I'm actually really proud of that little snippet.
I'm not sure why I downplayed it.