I appreciate the feedback on the previous haiku. I must admit I was happy with them and have since been pushing myself to create more that I was equally proud of. Apparently that's not how my creativity works though. :-) For the sake of continuing to write rather than waiting for the perfect lines to come, I post these.
Museum piece, mine.
Under glass, out of reach, my
creativity.
Sink of a thousand
knobs. Labeled in a strange tongue.
Creativity!
What's it take, LA,
for us to become SA?
~San Antonio
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